When I was very young I experimented with concrete poetry; this is one of my first attempts.


Elisabeth fading, aka I fly a kite for unrequited love

Elisabeth
Elisabet
Elisabe
Elisab
Elisa
Elis
Eli
El
E

Chris Fernie, 1970




Poetry by Chris Fernie
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Written on 2006-11-03 at 00:19

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Alas
Your title and your poem walk well hand in hand. Creativity shines in your format.
2006-11-09


la tristesse
quite e e cummings - i like it very much
2006-11-06


Kathy Lockhart
Very Clever and visible creation. The form is effected in both avenues depicted by either title.
2006-11-03