If a leaf falls, and no one catches it, does it matter?


Simplicity

I saw you fall.

you drifted
s
l
o
w
l
y

catching an air current

l i l t i n g

HIGH

l o w

SpInNiNg

until

you

r
e
s
t
e
d

on my

hand.

And

I

smiled.

Kathy Lockhart
10/03/06



Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2006-11-04 at 04:14

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keith nunes
mmmmmmmmm lovely!
2006-11-04


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This poem makes us care about this leaf! What a beautiful picture!
2006-11-04


Dani
such a good poet.
2006-11-04


Malin Johansson
This poem gives me beautiful images in my mind...
red leafs falling in the cold breeze
of the calming autumn that's on its way
Very beautiful picture in your poem!!!
2006-11-04


maxmedo
I like the style and the small pictures movie in my head now....And leaf falls always..

Rate: Beyond imagination

~MAX~
2006-11-04


Chris Fernie
Dear Kathy,

I like your use of typograghical techniques to emphasise the imagery and the movement of your ideas.

I floated with that lucky leaf.


Chris
2006-11-04


wee2souls
just a beautiful write,with a gentle feel
lovely:)
cindymac
2006-11-04


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wonderful images Katherine here and the clever format is so innovative well done rgds mike
2006-11-04


Xuxa
the structure really adds to the poem's effect! I loved it! =)
2006-11-04


Saga
Fall is so simple, it begins the new that must come!!!!
2006-11-04