Welcome every1, this is a co write as you see, the 2nd part is written by Marjan.
dooset daaram Marjan:)



a co-write with Marjan(when a word remains!)



there will be a time that i don't exist

but my valuable thoughts will still exist

when a word remains

it will join tomorrow & tomorrows

& the spirits will fly throughout the time like swallows

reminding the time we're a part of you

& remember i'll be a part of along story

when my words remain

what i'm writing down today

will remain ,will remain

yeah my words will saddle the time

my words will remain.....



let the rain wash away my dirt ,

even my name,

let it be erased,

let it be burned,

let it be burried in the breeze of time,

on the morrow,

I maybe no more seen with your eyes

even though many years hence

yet i can hear

my murmurs echoes in the eyes of tomorrow

drip by drip,merging in the background.

beware O self!

it's all in a second

slumber not!

the wistle's already blown.


By:good friends:)




Poetry by sabereh lotfian
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Written on 2006-11-09 at 09:51

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Amanda K
Couple of friends,
Excellent job. you both have a wild imagination and loved your theme. it was insightful and deep.

keep it up,
2006-11-28