playing with rhymes and rhythm. It's just a story, really.


Mexican Night

I drank tequila and ate tortillas
Bit the lime, kept the time
Played maracas, gulped Coronas
Twirled my skirt, love to flirt
His raven hair, put a rose there
Mexican night, I missed my flight
Hangover hell, I don't feel well
What's your name? I'm so ashamed
In your bed, I cover my head
I have a chill. I forgot my pill
Nine months pass, a bambino with sass
He plays the maracas just like his papa's.
Mexican night, it turned out alright!

Ole'

Kathy Lockhart
11/21/06






Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2006-11-22 at 02:06

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Daybreaker
Hehe, oh I really loved the ending of this.

"He plays the maracas just like his papa's."

Greeat rhytm!
2006-11-25


Chris Fernie
Dear Kathy,

This brief encounter love song ought to be set to music and recorded by Steve Martin! It's an uplifting verse, if you know what I mean.

See you on the road to Acapulco, my amigo!


Adios, Chris X
2006-11-23


Saga
With the luck of the Latin, excellent!!!
2006-11-23


penfold18
Great flow and rhythm Kathey as always a gem.
2006-11-22



:-D
ayayayay!!!
2006-11-22


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a lovely poem Katherine and this is so obviously you gentle style rgds mike
2006-11-22


brian paglia
Great job Kathy.I love the construction and again,what a wonderful idea behind this piece.It was awesome before you even wrote a word.awesome and totally enjoyed it
2006-11-22


Zachary P. B.
love the story told here.. and the rhyme scheme is tantalizingly magnetic.

sweet!
z
2006-11-22


Xuxa
Haha an entertaining read for sure. It's wonderful Kathy and really fun to read! :)
2006-11-22


Phyllis J. Rhodes
What an entertaining tale!
I'm glad it turned out so well
You got a bambino
Just don't go to Reno
Or you might end up in jail.
2006-11-22


wee2souls
eh!! I heard the Amigo's singing here:)
:)) do the Ramba I think that is Mexicano:))
loved this :)))
hugs to you sinurita:)) a wee smile for you:)
love
cindymac

OLE!!!!
2006-11-22


Coolaaron88
Wow interesting story, it flowed like a river. : )

~Aaron Rowe
2006-11-22