Dusk

In a cold morning
shimmering light
intrudes into my dusky room.
I agape my eyes...
the beam comes
unswerving into my eyes.
The whole day
strangles Earth in lessen.
The evening starts...
beautiful light gets
covered by opaque.
The beautiful light
leaves the earth in dusk




Poetry by Prakarrsh Dhungana
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Written on 2006-12-10 at 08:04

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Rob Graber
In the last line, "leaves" has a very nice double meaning. I suspect that "agape" and "lessen" are not the words you want; also, "strangles" is a most unexpected verb in light of the poem's mood. I enjoyed the poem though!
2006-12-10