Crescent bloom

 

 

 

A crescent moon

 lit the crystal clear night

I am

the night - flowering jasmine

My heart blooms

on the tree of sorrow

I blossom secretly

every night

Fragrance of

the undying love

My scent fills

your dreams





Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-12-16 at 00:23

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binesh
Romantic and so exquisitely beautiful . Congrats .
2006-12-22


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Reading the sheer beauty of this and experiencing it through my senses, a small gasp excaped my throat at the end. Wow! It is a living blossom of words with power to affect the reader just like the flower of whom it speaks.
2006-12-17


brian paglia
You have a style about you and it's not easy to describe.It's definately original.I love it and also enjoy the way you bring style to the words and the colors,etc.It's all good.
2006-12-17


Kathy Lockhart
I would love to plant you outside my bedroom window. I love the scent of jasmine. My tree of sorrow needs such as you to weave yourself throughout and bring joy and hope to all who feel and smell the aroma of all that it is you. I long to awake and look upon the beauty of the Jasmine blossom. Please send me a seed. : )
2006-12-16


gills
awesome read - I also like the way the imagry you used very delightful also liked the way the poem was set out... nice one :)
2006-12-16


Dan Cederholm
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This poem is just wonderful . . . what a

nice touch and sense you have plant

in it . . . BEAUTIFUL WORK!!!!

Hugs . . . and all the best to you, Dan

and a Bookmark.

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2006-12-16


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a lovely poem Night soul and so gently in your style well done rgds mike
2006-12-16


Saga
Such a romantic image of yourself darling!!!
2006-12-16



Beautiful imagery of all 6 senses thank you. I normally can't stand the color pink but for this poem it made sense. I like the shape of the poem.

~Kiva
2006-12-16