Ivory Tower

the ivory tower has fallen apart
like a newborn
I have to learn how to walk
big thoughts just run out in the sand
my realms aren't bigger
they all fit in the palm of my hand
light and shadows
day and night
no one knows
no one's that bright



Poetry by Elliott
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Written on 2006-12-30 at 23:10

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Rob Graber
Conversely to my reaction to your "Slice," here I find the conclusion most effective. In any case, another good write! (In line 6, you probably want "palm" rather than "pawn.")
2006-12-31