I wrote this for someone special. Who had to leave me for a Short while. With out him i wouldn't be so inspired. Please comment.


Garden Of Eden

My nightmare, repeats
Over and over again
I can't escape
The hold of this hell

Where am I
Suppose to escape to
Where there's no where
To hide from this heart ache
I can't describe
This pain I have to go through

If only
I was with you

I am your Eve
And you're my Adam
And let's escape
To our Garden of Eden

Please come back to me
Where we could live in peace
Because I really love you

Falling hard
Down this path
You've chosen for me

Everything has changed
Everything
Why must you my Adam
Leave me, Eve

Are you telling me to leave?
Don't end this yet
Please don't leave me alone

Don't leave me alone
In the dark
Like once before

Come back to our Garden of Eden
My Adam




Poetry by Angel D.
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Written on 2007-01-04 at 02:16

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wow. that is really good. i can't even be retarded like normal, i'm being very serious about this. that poem made me wanna cry. good job.
2007-01-06


Rob Graber
This really pulls sympathy--pity even--from the reader. Poor, poor Eve! Well done.
2007-01-04