Since you have been gone

the love's sun didn't shine
to push my black cloud
since you have been gone
the rainbow didn't appear
colors have disappeared
since you have been gone
words have missed
poetry has stopped
since you have been gone
i was unable to knock my door
because you weren't there.




Poetry by salem
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Written on 2007-01-08 at 15:29

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Hagzissa
Yes... this one was written in powerful words... easy to live yourself into since I think we've all been there at some point.
Good writing!
2007-03-11


Zainab
Nice write here
Well done my friend d:

Why don't you take a look in my text
It's titled the same only a bit different

"Since you been gone"
2007-01-09


Teala
A painful yearning of love...beautifully done.
2007-01-09


kath
this is when love hurts and you belive you will never smile again... this is the cruel part of loving ...
and yet having someone who we miss in such a way is a wonder ..

your words speak of it in every essence
rgds kath
2007-01-08



such a deep love and also so much pain! a very sensitive poem
Lilly xxx
2007-01-08


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Since i miss someone at present I relate to this beautiful text well done man so powerful rgds mike
2007-01-08