Haiku for loose litter

Trees fish in the wind,
arch and bend with their new catch -
rippling plastic bags.



Chris Fernie, 2007




Haiku by Chris Fernie
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Written on 2007-01-11 at 10:37

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Rob Graber
A truly wonderful haiku, Chris! "Trees fish in the wind" is just great; perhaps the metaphor would also bear elaboration in a longer poem? Do they catch more than one "species," maybe? :-,?
2007-01-11


Sandy Hiss
Excellent haiku. I love the imagery here.
2007-01-11


Kathy Lockhart
great big smiles for this one Chris. I see it all!
2007-01-11