longing

the wind opened my window
during your knocking on the door
I knew the yearning had increased.



Poetry by salem
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Written on 2007-01-13 at 08:58

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Hagzissa
Short but such a wonderful text! Think the underlines says more than the words you actually see..... I like it!
2007-03-07


Zainab
Yes I agree with mama kathy it is short but very sweet
Simple your words are
But I wonder how special there are!
d:
2007-01-13


kath
as a piece from a film ...

it tells in few words of a strong and passionate feeling and the opening of the window when love and passion knock on our door is splendid

rgds kath
2007-01-13


Kathy Lockhart
salem you have written a lovely piece that evokes a wealth of feelings. It is short but very effective.
2007-01-13



splendid, salem, just splendid! short and full of meanings! i love it!

Lilly xxx
2007-01-13