Haiku 3

Black and white sensai
Circles like a stern swallow -
Teaches me to fly.





Chris Fernie, 2008






Poetry by Chris Fernie
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Written on 2007-01-13 at 23:59

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Zoya Zaidi
I just love this vibrant piece!
A befitting tribute to Sandy.
I am sure she is going to love this Chris!
(((Hugs)))
love, Zoya
2007-01-14


Rob Graber
Well captures the spirit of the fairgound! I really like the juxtaposition in lines 7 and 8, even if scientists and priests are seldom seen (in the flesh) at the fairground... ;-,?
2007-01-14