Meeting In Paradise

I can only feel sadness...
I can't taste,
I can't see.
'cause you said,you were in love with another girl.
Then you turned to hide your tears,
But I could feel you were crying...
You were lying;
I saw that in your eyes.
You were tired,like me
But you were tired different than me;
You were dying,
Why didn't you tell me?
If you were told me,
I could share my heart and body.
You hadn't have to die!
Didn't you think,I'd want to hold your hand for the last?
I know,before you've completely gone,
You visited me
But I was crying,laying on my bed;
I was angry with you!
Why did you do that to me?to us?
Wait for me,I'll come to your paradise...



Poetry by Nilay
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Written on 2007-02-02 at 19:51

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amandeep
Welcome on poetbay
great ................
nice poem. love ;love...........everywhere you can see love everywhere.

""I can only feel sadness...
I can't taste,
I can't see.
'cause you said,you were in love with another girl.
Then you turned to hide your tears,
But I could feel you were crying...""

i liked these lines very much i think irt happens on;ly in true love. what a great love!!!
in true love we can undertand the untold words of our love.

love is just like a glass if it breaks it is hard to fix but even if you manage then it cant be the same.

nice. great work.
2007-02-03


seda
Firstly Welcome to Poetbay my dear friend!! I hope you will enjoy here.

this poem is WONDERFUL !! it is your first poem ,but I know you will improve your poetry .And I am so happy you share your works with us.

Love,

Your friend Seda
2007-02-02


Parnika
found some grammatical errors. U must have been feeling real hard while writing this..I felt the first few lines..I'm sort of in the same boat..by the end of it tho u lost me.
2007-02-02