Roman Journey: Prelude


dawning

incendiary
red ball
rising

clouds
blushing
pink flesh
white

new day
dawning
but the
old day
is not
over

yet



Poetry by Peter Humphreys The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-02-19 at 16:49

Tags Journey  Love  Rome 

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Bob
I love it, but I would have spaced like:

Incendiary red ball rising

clouds blushing
pink flesh
white

new day dawning
but the old day
is not over

yet
2009-06-07


normalil
The old day never dies in the Eternal City Peter. Looking forward to reading the rest of your Italian anthology.
2008-08-28