Title and poem say it all.


Apology

A teardrop lost slides from your eye,
Evaporates on your cheek so proud.
Condenses on a pressured sky,
Returnes to vision as a cloud.

But as the cloud erupts to rain
It saturates the scorn within.
A balm to cure the harshest pain,
An ointment to relieve the sin.

For sometimes I am such a fool I
Forget not to take you for granted.
In times somewhat unusual
My feet with you are firmly planted.

And as we trudge our weary path
Our hearts must not feel suffering.
The winter now is aT our backs,
Together we can face the Spring.



Poetry by stevelee
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Written on 2007-02-22 at 20:28

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kayce
I love the way you started the poem, is a nice poem quite emotional.
2008-12-11


normalil
I am intruiged by the reply from Linda.......it's a lovely write and I liked it very much. You are a real man to write such a thing, (hope u don't eat quiche!) Regards, normalil.
2007-03-10



A man that can apologise like that, is a man indeed. Well done stevie. I got one last night, from a young gir friend of my son's, it took her 6 months and she did it on the eve of his birthday, a greatly appreciated gift it was too.

Loving flow to this Apology poem.

Smiling at you,

Tai
2007-03-03