Hope this was a strong poem.
Maybe it is best if it is read out loud, it is your choice though.



You took me by the head!

You declared that none of us...
Would go far...

You took me by the head
and threw me in the sand
said once again!
Time is passing
by...

You said, you screamed,
but nothing were real!

You were the only one

I claimed...

To see the treasure
of
life...




Poetry by Poe_t
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Written on 2005-11-01 at 10:46

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SparrowN
If your goal is to write strong, moving poetry, you probably wont. This isn't. Don't be too melodramatic. Keep on trying, though.
2005-11-02