Pamela A Lamppa
I liked this a great deal. "Time is a cloud enveloping truth"
that is an awesome line and a note to live by. Wonderful words. I am surprised more people haven't commented on this poem. It is very good. Truly struck a chord with me today. Well done. A pleasure to have read and enjoyed. ~Pamela
2007-04-21

Karen Canning
love the last line it totally completes this well written poem

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-03

Kathy Lockhart
once i was sure and opinionated about many things and now as i grow older my view has been altered to see most things as grey instead of black and white. As we grow wiser (hopefully) with age, we often learn more about life and see that we really are not as all-knowing as we once thought. I say, "the older I get, the less I know." This poem brought forth this thought again powerfully with a gentle flow. I love the symbolism and the vividly emotive imagery. As you can see by my long comment, I am deeply moved by your poem. I sit here mesmerized.
2007-03-03