When God cries

God creates
Man follows
Creation is divine
Following is human
O my beloved!
You are divine
You can create a life
You, a flower of creation


The creator suffers
The follower enjoys
God created this life
Therefore,
He must be in a tragedy

O my love!
When you cry
I am always by your side
When God cries
He must be crying alone
We are a thousand times happier than God




Poetry by Gopi
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Written on 2007-03-04 at 06:30

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Venkatesh India
dear gopi,
i like the following lines..

The creator suffers
The follower enjoys
thankyou!
2007-09-27


Individuality
a good poem. if we are a thousand times happier than god then god help us!
2007-04-03


Lavender
A poem that stimulates the reader's mind to imagine how God might feel. An exercise most phenomenal, and the poet's words are nicely penned!
2007-04-02


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Welcome to poetbay :) An interesting thought indeed. . . Well written
2007-03-06


Zoya Zaidi
Hmmmmmmmm! some food for thought there dear Gopi!
Welcome to the bay!
Love, Zoya
2007-03-04


betsy Firefly
Glad yo have read the first poem by you, Gopi. Hope to read many, mnay more.
betsy
2007-03-04