day breaks

silent
skyscapes
drifting
by
as
we
lie
and
fly
across
the plains
of
our own
imaginings
where
azure
sky
clouds
indigo
set forth
against
the
reddening glow
of
eventime's
awakenings
I kiss you
tender
on the lips
that glisten
in the
mistening morn
and
as we
shake
ourselves
anew
to view
the dawn's
first
cautious
light
the birds
stop
singing

day
breaks




Poetry by Peter Humphreys The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-03-19 at 14:20

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Very colorful imagery, I love sunrises, and you managed to capture a splendid view here...the photo suites the text aswell, the whole assembly induces me with a state of emotion, of expectation of the soon-to-rise sun...It's a beautiful image, and the feeling of "human amazement" will still hold my breath within my lungs...a little bit more...till the day breaks...
*bookmarked, of course! And thank you for sweetening my day with this wonderful creation!
Lilly xxx
2007-03-27


salem
awesome poem
2007-03-25


Nyorioko
Very romantic acctualy. A nice poem:)
2007-03-19