Going Down

self constructed cathedrals of past praise
licks amnesia thigh condemnation;
external pyre, retribution's malaise.

moist ring concocts sensual salvation
cascading cunnilingus carnal flare
licks amnesia thigh condemnation.

gratification's temporal blind stares
institution of lust priority
cascading cunnilingus carnal flare.

haze lifts degraded deception's decree,
spread directs daze in inferno prison
institution of lust priority.

open immersed flaps trap tunnel vision,
tasteful ardor hugs insecurities;
spread directs haze in inferno prison.

burning decadent dependencies free
self constructed cathedrals of past praise.
tasteful ardor hugs insecurities;
external pyre, retribution's malaise.



Poetry by aliceramone
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Written on 2007-03-20 at 03:05

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ardent.March
Oh, I just read Ian's comment, nevermind! lol!
2007-03-21


ardent.March
I like this. What is this form? Villanelle?
tasteful ardor hugs insecurities;
cascading cunnilingus carnal flare ~
Nice alliteration. Nice imagery!
2007-03-21


Individuality
ah the terzanelle, a cool form, not too many notes here, just right with the flow. and though i have just put a cigarette out i suddenly have the urge for a few more lol - as ever with alliteration you flow smoothly along. oh and it is funny to see someone who would not comment in a poem of mine about gentle love posting a comment here where you mention cunnilingus!
2007-03-20