individualtean form-----form created by Individuality


Melancholy Folly

annoyed results from life's terms tenacious
badgering, fixed dissection cleaves.
leaves entity diverse;
senseless drivels underachieve,
break sanity, embarking fallacious
hollow musings perverse.

averse real
instant cliche
writing mad towards the grave.

saved abstruse illusion, deep and spacious
penning sweet disaster relieves
eve of fear from death's curse.
stark ramblings, daily reprieve;
tangibility adduced audacious,
turns pride in reverse.

verse will feel
dark mind decay;
staring at screen, stanza slave.

gave up reality, melancholy's
folly entertainment courts finale.




Poetry by aliceramone
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Written on 2007-04-04 at 02:13

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Kiran
Fantastic! Great imagery. I just love your writing style! Well done, and you have certainly mastered this form! :-)
2007-04-04


Individuality
you have definitely made this a form where even though i set the bar you have made this your own, your unique style fits this form really well i think. a great piece.
2007-04-04