This is a christian poem that i did, jus started writin poetry... pls let me know want u think- positive and/or negative opinion would do. you can msg me


The battle inside

THE BATTLE INSIDE

I Try and live a straight life
But always turning left or right
Something I want but not nesscarily need
Just trying to satisfy my constant greed
Then on my knees
Asking God to please forgive me

I know when I going wrong
But I find myself still going on
I know want I am doing
Just need to ask God to help through it

It's a battle between my flesh and my spirit
There is no limit
But I know I want my spirit to win it

When I eventually cross the line
I hope I haven't ran out of time
But hopefully be fine
Cause I don't want to be left behind






Poetry by mystry G
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Written on 2007-03-22 at 01:14

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GrEat job!!!!just always turn right!!!!!kissess
2007-03-30


Zainab
This was a great text

Nice write ^^

Hope to read more of your work ^^
2007-03-24