the poem talks about a distance between two brother who seek to be together, but yet there were 2gether. Though it was never their wish, but they have to comprehend and wait the day they meet either in life or death.


THE MILES

The hood I remember
The blood of mine
From green to grey
The infantry plea

Of cause it stood
To a span of juvenile
Where it changed and swayed
Of miles in-between
And days untold
If life or death.

In words we thrive
The passion of inventory
And kept the portrait
We knew and wished

Abreast our thought
We stood in obviousness
Waiting in readiness
For our kingdom to come




Poetry by Owen
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Written on 2007-04-11 at 13:20

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Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
It speaks of conflict the importance of maintaining ones self image despite everything else. A well written poem, enjoyed the read.
2007-04-12


nature
deep and beautifull
thanks for sharing
2007-04-11