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NOTE: 2007 05 07  13H19 EST Flumzuey Chibouki - entry to Jabberwocky challenge...

Flumzuey Chibouki - (Jabberwocky Challenge)

- i read Lewis Carroll's Jabberwocky poem, and mine here, to my children... made them laugh so very much hehe :D 

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Scandering about is the flumzuey Chibouki,
Rumsteadily, it galamanders the Shomstocky,
But behold should its mordarted cramblersorg soar
For it’s said that the dreer Lollimotter curse'll roar!

In slogner nackercrooks and omderfaffs it dwells,
Vigilant in the nooks of the dim girumswells!
It awaits most grignaster for thee to froysenter
For the flumzuey Chibouki’s a deringester!

Then, bara baroo to the one who's caught sunter flimmed
In the dinsilmirks without a lighted tanderslim!
For it’s believed, cannerslinks don't swarden easily
Once the Lollimotter curse’s loosed into the croorly!

“Chibouki! Chibouka!” resounds over Shomstocky
When flumzuey Chibouki scurrinjers so splarnky!
Ready to framp carefree sarwandings through its lands,
With its cramblersorg, it'll barragode both thine hands!

And klipgotted, thy legs will somder and staid, too!
Alas, none be the wiser for thy frackling vhoo,
For gornt wanderlusts leave no slace of a trace nor hint
Hence a flumzuey Chibouki’s untarblering sklint!

And so scanders about scralivanning Shomstocky
The ever rumsteady and flumzuey Chibouki,
And should its romblisterning cramblersorg be soaring
Woe beshakened! The Lollimotter curse'll come roaring!

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Written on 2007-05-08 at 19:21

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
In response to this veritable master piece
Have tried to write one of my own.
THE FLUMMOX will post tomorrow.
Hugs and kisses my friend.
Regards Alan.

Zoya Zaidi
What a delightful Poemsy boo!
I am sure the children loved it too...
Now, without much a doo,
Would you please read my poemsy poo?

(((I greatly enjoyed this)))
I must say you have a delightful talent for the Jabberwocking!
Love, Zoya

Rob Graber
Delightfully jabberwockian!

Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
You guys are so good at these :) Really enjoying reading

Elle x

Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Scary stuff, will sleep with the lights on tonight :-) and where do i buy a "Tanderslim". Wicked entry.