broken tears

I am still waiting for heaven
to finally call my name
I know that you all love me
in death you'll do the same

The day I leave you
my love will be your guide
please promise to not forget
I'm always by your side

I will tell how much I love you
the last day I fall asleep
I will tell about our memories
I'm always going to keep

The day I am stading in front of
the paradise, heavens door
I know this is the last goodbye
then I can't see you anymore

But if you're going outside
and the wind whispers in your ear
It's me who try to tell you
that I am always here






Poetry by nevermind
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Written on 2005-11-19 at 12:43

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Richard
This is beautiful though the sadness.
But pls stay with us and give us more of your inner thoughts.
Hugs, Richard
2006-10-11


Sofiul Azam
I think it's a nice poem that deserves attention from readers. I congratulate you on your decision that you have to be here and to post your work. I hope you will post more of your work at this Poetbay. Anyway, I really wish to read more.
2006-01-20


John Ashleigh
"But if you're going outside
and the wind whispers in your ear"

Sexy - almost romantic and passionate. A single whisper can send you feelings more higher than the emotions you're purposely portraying.

This is good, darlin'!
2005-11-19