Another one of my old poems. It may seem a little clumsy. But here it is.


When I am besides you

My heart is soft my feelings are calm
The evening sky seems to be in my palm
All that anger has melted down
The happiness I craved, is now found
I want to fly up high; in the sky so blue
I feel like this when I am besides you

The joy and truth comes flying to me
Now I am as happy as I could be
Sadness and cries have flown away
The wind chants a sweet child's pray
But one thing is certain and it is true
I feel like this when I am besides you




Poetry by Khulud Baig
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Written on 2007-05-29 at 14:39

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M Heathcote
Hi Khulud

Beautiful and emotional
feelings very well expressed
Really enjoyed the first two couplets
2007-05-29


Zoya Zaidi
Beautiful!
*Bookmarked*
(((Hugs dear Khulud)))
Love, Zoya
2007-05-29