it felt good anyway...


Like Gothic Love

Well...
she came down the angels stairway...

with an hymen of total pure beauty....
you'll turn to diamond dust, she said.

if i could explain...

when she smiles at me, it feels like
a thousand smiles at the same time...
her face a thousand dreams...
as i see you brightly gleem, everything
fades to darkness around, glaring...
sunlight, when everything is darkness
you shine...

emotional seduction,
total statisfaction...

lips like a pair of wings, who'll
take you to heaven, with it's touch...

a thousand smiles which take away all
my pain, all darkness, dissappear it seem...

eyes like an ocean if i'm not
experienced
enough i could drown into,
if you let me swim in your
ocean of hearthly red...

the many forms of beauty
my declaration of love...

her femininity, so divine,
mellow calm...

if we could ride across the red ocean
and reach those
fields of beauty, and cross land.
swing me home to heaven, sweet angel.

i'm yours to controll...



Poetry by asshole
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Written on 2007-06-28 at 03:18

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I loved this spontaneous act of loving awareness Asshole!lol You make me laugh with that name...lol Well done on the great poem and making me smile even more!lol One typo, take the 'L' out of control. and what do you get. A miserable asshole!rofl sweet work, Tai

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2007-06-28