Blue Ribbon Romance

Clear blue sky eats its way
thru white cookies of cloud.

as birds of sight stake the way
of my star gazing eye.

the pointing compass of my heart.
gather together me into human form
and dreams of eternity in her eye.
Revives my dead identity.

As she had
no eyes, no ears.
no lips, no nose.
she still wept diamonds
and sang like a
river of pearling beauty.



Poetry by asshole
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Written on 2009-01-05 at 06:37

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OMG what fantastic final three lines this gorgouse piece of pure romance has my friend! I refuse to call you by your chosen name in the glow of this wonderful poem. I loved every line and those final ones, just blew me a kiss. Thanks for sharing, smiling at you, wishing you the best of everything in 2009

Tai

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2009-01-05