I think we should explore every inch of our own world before pushing on to others, there is so much more to learn here.


A World Within A World.

I've sailed on many Oceans

Swam in many seas

Seen corals that shone like diamonds

And reefs like giant trees

So many vivid colours

A multitude of hues

Another world within a world

Of liquid greens and blues

So many different species

That live and thrive below

Some never see the light of day

Yet in darkness they still glow

There is so much we have to learn

About the mysteries of the deep

Forget the race for outer space

We have more treasures here to seek.




Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2007-07-07 at 11:07

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Dan Cederholm
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Yes you have so right about
that there is so many things
and mysteries left to find
and earth is a remakeble
place to live in and on!!!

All the best, Dan

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2007-07-09


Amanda K
wisdom does shine through this well-written piece. I do agree that we have search within ourselves , our realities and surroundings before we move to out. We have a lot to work on and i admire most the lines below,

Forget the race for outer space

We have more treasures here to seek.
2007-07-07