This is a true poem... when I was 10 I started to date my nieghbor and when I was 11 he was told he had cancer.... I suck with him through everything.. And then 2 days b4 my 12th b-day he died in my arms....

PLEASE!! Dont criticize this poem........


He was my passion...My desire

He made me look forward to the future

The day he was diagnosed was hell

Cancer....had encased his lung

My darling struggled with his pain

...Then he died taking my soul also..

At a very young age of only 13

He slipped through my fingers as if sand

I remember his voice and his love

His if an angel in my dreams

The wind still whisks his name across my ear

Now as I look at his grave I can't understand

Why I couldn't help him... in his time of need

Dear Brian....I'm sorry.... for your pain....

And the dreams we never achieved

Poetry by Dark Angel
Read 814 times
Written on 2007-08-27 at 10:28

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text

you are one jewel of a poet....emotions well heard....kip riting...