This is a true poem... when I was 10 I started to date my nieghbor and when I was 11 he was told he had cancer.... I suck with him through everything.. And then 2 days b4 my 12th b-day he died in my arms....

PLEASE!! Dont criticize this poem........



..Sorry...

He was my passion...My desire


He made me look forward to the future


The day he was diagnosed was hell


Cancer....had encased his lung


My darling struggled with his pain


...Then he died taking my soul also..


At a very young age of only 13


He slipped through my fingers as if sand


I remember his voice and his love


His touch...as if an angel in my dreams


The wind still whisks his name across my ear


Now as I look at his grave I can't understand



Why I couldn't help him... in his time of need



Dear Brian....I'm sorry.... for your pain....



And the dreams we never achieved




Poetry by Dark Angel
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Written on 2007-08-27 at 10:28

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suraj
you are one jewel of a poet....emotions well heard....kip riting...
2007-08-27