Dinner's served


dinner's served up on rooftops
dinner's served up in treetops
dinner's served inside of dogs

- lift up your skirt and fart!




Poetry by Amazingfriendlyapple
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Written on 2005-07-01 at 00:22

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
but i will rate how i see fit as to it being good or bad in my opinion - that is why there is a choice of 1 to 5 with the rating!
2005-07-05


lou bergs
I too have to admit that I don't really get what you're going for here, but that's probably just em being slow :). I like the choice of words though. Simple, funny and a bit bizarre.

And honestly chasingtheday, if you find this poetry to be nonsense, there's really no point to give bad comments and down rate every piece the writer uploads, is there ;).
2005-07-03


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
again, more nonsense poetry. i like humour poetry, i have done many but this...
2005-07-01