Hypothetically Factual

If we died tomorrow
We could count the tears
Of Sorrow

First and second day of tears
Perhaps a third or fourth, then
Only memories remaining of our years

We can ask, looking back at the past
Was it worth the strife?
Our lives asunder, day one through the last

Actually, though hypothetically faced
It's sadly pertinent
'Cause actually it's factually based

Isn't it?

by Stan Cooper...11/5/2007 graphic by Don Hunt

Poetry by Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-11-11 at 11:04

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Winston Latanafrancia Soldevilla
It's so sad to note that as years pass by after the day we die we can only be remembered. But, I Think, If we want to be remembered well, we must do something beautiful to others so that our lives would be worth looking back. Interesting write my friend.(WLS)

ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
to look back to know we made a posatve difrance , is our hope , tears for those who cant look back and say '' i made a difrance , gave reasan for pepole to laugh , to smile , saide or did something did a kindnes , then we can ''goo'' with a smile , proude of being us''

Thank you Stan and Don , as you 2 make a difrance . all the best 2 both of you, Ken :)