The naked fighter





¤
Put
down your shield
¤ Throw down your sword ¤
Look into my eyes
Speak!
¤





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Written on 2008-01-30 at 16:26

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Yeshi Paljor
its nice
2008-04-05


Zoya Zaidi
Dear Caermen,
Strong words, clear and pricise message, lovingly delivered!
I love this short crisp piece!
Very you!
(((Fond Hugs)))
Love,
Zoya
2008-02-03


Century
Battle with words ... if looks can kill ... strip to fight ... hmm ... let's say 'silence is golden'
2008-02-01


Kathy Lockhart
what a powerful poem visually as well as poetically. You have a way of creating images that linger long after the last word is read. xx kathy
2008-02-01


Judy T Lloyd
Oh yes this text is well worth reading and I must say good job. This one certainly makes you think.
2008-02-01


David L Wright
Sounds like my ex wife. Good piece though. Happy trails
2008-01-31


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
I speak Carmen un shielded and unarmed a clever beautiful text and welcome back baby
rgds mike
2008-01-30