When You Said You Loved Me.

When you said you loved me,
I thought you really cared.
When you said you would always be here
for me,
I thought you always would.
But as the days go by,
I never stop wondering
if I was right,
and if my decision was for the good.
Things changed between me and you,
and you know it very well.
I knew this would come,
I just didn't expect it so soon.
This was the day you said farewell.
But at least I could get back to my
unlived life
That I had ignored for a year.
At least I knew how to make myself
happy,
without someone by my side.
2008-04-06





Poetry by Sarah Mae
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Written on 2008-04-06 at 02:15

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Rob Graber
I like this poem! There are a couple misspellings, and you might consider line breaks as follows:

When you said you loved me,
I thought you really cared.
When you said you would always be here for me,
I thought you always would.
But as the days go by,
I never stop wondering
if I was right,
and if my decision was for the good.
Things changed between me and you,
and you know it very well.
I knew this would come,
I just didn't expect it so soon.
This was the day you said farewell.
But at least I could get back to my unlived life
That I had ignored for a year.
At least I knew how to make myself happy,
without someone by my side.
2008-04-06