Nightingale21
So many of us, have been where you've been.Felt what you've felt. Your words and structure of the poem was intertwined beautifully. I hope your poems brings comfort to you.
2008-06-01

Awenlimobor Sylvester
i have been out of here for a while, and what a fantastic return i had reading this poem, Kathy, what would we be without you?

lovely poem, from a lovely poet
2008-05-29

penfold18
Such sadness for me is always difficult to read, but I feel your grief none the less, your anguish in these words is a tangible thing, its to soon to speak of time being the healer that it is, grief is a process that has to run its course, I feel your loss deeply but my wishes and prayers are now with you Kathy, may God grant you safe passage through the times ahead~Graham.
2008-05-29

One day, those craters will be filled by clear water and turn into ponds that reflect the sky. In them, the cutest fish will be swimming, and around them will beautiful flowers grow...
2008-05-28

M Heathcote
Hi Kathy

The form is good; your sentiment is wonderfully put and expressed, deep sympathies for you both!

Mark x
2008-05-27

I wrote something like this when my beloved Howard died on me Kathy, same words, same sentiments, we just have to keep writing as I did back then. It is good for us, it enables us to express our grief and keep on living. Just keep writing out your souls pain and all will be ok, not good, but ok. Big hug from Tai x
2008-05-27

kath
I see your pain, I feel your hurt in your words, I wish that I could use a magic wond and change the past so this would not have needed to be written.

Hugs
Kath
2008-05-26