A play on words or maybe colours not sure :-)


The picture you painted...

hanging on the wall
cold and lost
waiting for the canvass to dry
colours invade
reframe the past
priceless, auctioned
never meant to last
a single brush stroke
an abstract moment
an impressionist's point of view
your pallet is empty
my classical observation
every single line
lacking any depth or hue.


© Rik - 11/07/2008



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Written on 2008-07-11 at 21:33

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stef lai
whoa xx =]
2008-09-07


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
That sounds so sad and empty - always written with depth

Emmax
2008-07-11