This is a poem my boyfriend John wrote but last night we just broke up. He wrote this after i broke up with him. Tell me what you people think!


Love is...

Love is the greatest feeling,
Love is like a play,
Love is what I feel for you,
Each and every day,
Love is like a smile,
Love is like a song,
Love is a great emotion,
That keeps us going strong,
I love you with my heart,
My body and my soul,
I love the way I keep loving,
Like a love I can't control,
So remember when your eyes meet mine,
I love you with all my heart,
And I have poured my entire soul into you,
Right from the very start.




Poetry by Mandee
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Written on 2006-01-11 at 13:45

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DesignatLife
A great lift from your past poems...It's beautiful
2006-01-14


lynn
awww.. that was really good i hope you have some good luck with that. you are a wonderful poet.
XXXX- lynn
2006-01-13


Zoya Zaidi
"And I have poured my entire soul into you,
Right from the very start."
THESE LAST TWO LINES GO TO PROVE HE STILL LOVE YOU!
So, how about making up?
Not a bad idea to give him another chance... But your friend is a poet alright, and a good one at that!!!
All the best with him, Mandee!!!
xxx, Zoya
2006-01-11


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Mandee
love is a bitch sometimes but dont throw it away for the sake of saying sorry to each other a nice poem but the guy obviously is hurting so give him a chance please

regards mike
2006-01-11