Maybe...


...I can start to hope that...

God.
Or something.
Oh wow.
Does this mean...?

Tightly you
hold me close
in your arms.
Never would I have
guessed this could ever be true, until
some short number of days ago...

Hmm.
At what
point were you
planning on letting me go,
exactly?
Never would be nice...

Alas,
forever is
too long for our
exuberant band director, who
requires our presence on the field.

Anyway,
later you won't have to
let me go

...



Words by WildGoose
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Written on 2008-09-07 at 20:03

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maxmedo
Das ist sehr gut, umm ich bin Max, hallo..well i love the questioning style alot..it leaves the reader with such wondering effect...

~Max
2008-09-10


Nick Matherne
Now that you mention this whole thing
It is hard to believe this has all happend
Clearly it is for the best
Everything is finally falling into place

good poem
I think I actually may publish this comment as a poem
2008-09-07