an autumn breeze

gently pulling down

the dying leaves.

Poetry by Aaron Jon Wells
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Written on 2005-07-08 at 16:49

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gorgeous words
gorgeous layout
gorgeous poem

First of all I love this, it's simple yet elegant!!!!
My take on this is.... Real Love will renew an old dead love., Blossom into something new and beautiful like leaves on a tree, the dead leaves will fall off and new ones will grow in place of the old when nurtured.

StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
makes me sad... thinking of people taking care of loved ones as they age and die, or a lover putting away someone's things after they've died... how's that for depressing, i guess you take your own mindset with you and read poetry through a shaded lense - your mood.

this is an eloquent, sad write

one tiny gripe, gentley to gently, as it's so few words one typo can throw the whole thing off.

well done,


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
arr now this one i can - mother nature cleaning the cupboards. it will be time to sweep soon.