love


an autumn breeze

gently pulling down

the dying leaves.




Poetry by Aaron Jon Wells
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Written on 2005-07-08 at 16:49

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jacy
gorgeous words
gorgeous layout
gorgeous poem
2005-07-10


LurieJune
First of all I love this, it's simple yet elegant!!!!
My take on this is.... Real Love will renew an old dead love., Blossom into something new and beautiful like leaves on a tree, the dead leaves will fall off and new ones will grow in place of the old when nurtured.
2005-07-08


StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
makes me sad... thinking of people taking care of loved ones as they age and die, or a lover putting away someone's things after they've died... how's that for depressing, i guess you take your own mindset with you and read poetry through a shaded lense - your mood.

this is an eloquent, sad write

one tiny gripe, gentley to gently, as it's so few words one typo can throw the whole thing off.

well done,

~StillHoppin
2005-07-08


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
arr now this one i can - mother nature cleaning the cupboards. it will be time to sweep soon.
2005-07-08