freedom (acrostic challenge)



Perfection: hard to complete
Obstacles: meant to defeat
Erroneous it might be...
My lack of metre sets me free!



Poetry by Nordsaga
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Written on 2008-11-19 at 11:25

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Ghost of Heino
aha! but is the metre just a self inflicted obstacle that is in need of defiance?
Never complete your perfection Nordsaga. You got me on my toes.
I like it.
2008-11-19


Kathy Lockhart
so very clever. i love this! thanks ; )
2008-11-19