Breezes

A special breath has been whispering
Around my neck of late...
Some breezes cool us during the heat-
Evaporate accumulated burnings.
Yet it's cold here now.
Is that why the breath is so warm?
It hits the back of my neck
Even when the breather isn't around
Which astounds me.

I might breathe back of course
But first will merely inhale.

Why rush in front of breezes?



Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2008-11-25 at 01:09

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Peter J. Kautsky
This warm breeze -- is it telling you that you must do something?
Like run with the bulls at Pamplona? Thanks for reading my poem "shooting the street' you are the second reader I've run into from Portugal.
2008-11-25


Rob Graber
This warm write is a "special breath" indeed!
2008-11-25