Maybe someday I'll stop writing poetry in physics and start paying attention to the teacher...

Apologies, the lines are all broken in the wrong places. Not my fault X)



Scarlet Tears

You never stop to think what fates your trespasses could breed
or how your lies could hurt me. You just want to leave your mark.
You cut me to the core and then stand back and watch me bleed,

your boots encased in tainted snow, turned red with bloody speed
as I lie mourning your retreat from beauty into dark
and how you never think what fates your trespasses could breed.

They soon will cause you torment. Sated bloodlust will not feed
your lonely fingers, cold without my touch. I pale to stark
shades of tarnished moonlight as you stand back and watch me bleed

scarlet tears from wounds you've ripped in me. Lustful is your greed---
you kiss the hollow at my throat, eyes mad with flame and spark.
Never do you stop to think what fates this wrong could breed.

You wipe your darkened brow, where anxious gleaming sweat drops bead
and turn from my last gasping breath. You leave without remark.
You never stopped to think what fate your trespasses will breed;
just cut me to the core and then stepped back to watch me bleed.




Poetry by Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
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Written on 2008-12-05 at 00:43

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Yes slightly on the morbid side of a relationship, whether it be parent or lover, what I must say is, it takes two to tango my friend! If you don't like what this person has to say, don't listen, is my advice. Physics is a great subject...study hard and your teacher will give you all the attention you need, not to mention the government funds! smiling at you, the mother of a physics
star in the making.
2008-12-09


Ducks
rather bleak but...
AMAZING

Your poem is
Outstanding and
Uunbelievably great!

Are you aware
Really of just how
Expressive

And
Majestically you
Are able to
Zing your message
Into our minds
Near our hearts
Great write!
2008-12-05


Kaede
ooh the lines fix themselves when you try to comment :)
this is dismal and scary
but expertly crafted, as usual
2008-12-05