Might as well fall in something...

Improper line breaks, again.



Into Nothingness

She lies alone and heartsick, seeking counsel from above,
her every prayer a puzzle even God can't understand.
She gradually has come to fear she'll never be in love

the way people are supposed to be. She sees pictures of
new parents with their babies, beaming proudly, hand-in-hand
and lies alone and heartsick, seeking counsel from above

praying God might grant her mercy, and send the very dove
that brought Noah safe to shore. But she cannot see the land
and gradually concludes she'll never really be in love.

She wears no shred of confidence, but doubt fits like a glove
around her mind, her throat, until she cannot breathe or stand.
She lies, alone and heartsick, and seeks counsel from above,

but receives no answer. It doesn't help when others shove
her into nothingness. Her mother's gone. She shivers, and
falls to despair, since clearly now she'll never be in love

or anything but lonely. She turns over, sighs, thinks of
someday being happy. Says "It will happen, and be grand."
But she lies. Alone and heartsick, no counsel from above,
she gradually accepts that she will never be in love.




Poetry by Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
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Written on 2008-12-11 at 05:02

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Morgan Cellohead
I think I might cry. I'm sorry you were/are feeling this way.
2008-12-17


Less Than I Ought
sweet sorrow
beautiful villanelle
I do hope you are not so lonely soon
it is the day not so far off that this poem's message will be a thing of the past
2008-12-12


Kaede
a beautiful villanelle.
you won't be lonely forever-
you deserve so much more than that
2008-12-11



It can be like that sometimes, fall into ( ) what seems like nothingness. This poem is really priceless, it really depicts heart rendering material, very well written and unfortunately true, what a price to pay to give such a beautifully, soul filled poem.

If I can offer some comfort? All these feelings are learning structures to steer us into finding hope filled adventures.
2008-12-11