Rhyming about my first poem on this site!


My First


I want to join this poetic cast
An arena i know i will last,
my skill is not yet vast
but that will soon be past.

To prove myself i must
For i belly this great lust,
to win over all your trust
Ask why? ..i say just.

'ave certainly quenched my thirst
And do hope you had a blast,
I promise to pick up real fast
So lets just call this.... my first.





Poetry by in'kwa
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Written on 2006-01-23 at 15:59

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Amanda K
go ahead an apply wut mentioned there. wishing u the best.
2006-06-21


kip
...for a first, i must applaud you my friend for its certainly a blast, put more pen to paper, or finger to keyboard...lookin foward to readin more...
2006-01-24



Welcome, and may this first poem be the worse of all you'll ever write:). Good luck and hope to read more of you here! Lilly
2006-01-24


penfold18
First off welcome to the bay,and if this is your first attempt then we can expect plenty more no doubt well done :-))
2006-01-23