Just some Haiku trial


HAIKU suite


Melted has the snow

good bye watery snowman

bunny eats carrot



Early morning sun

birds and butterflies compete

wakening flowers



Spring rain in city

umbrellas in fullest bloom

water finds shoe hole



Spiders shake their webs

violent rainstorm and wind

cloths are wet again



Hunters aim at prey

reindeer herd slowly passes

camera shooting




Haiku by Northlight
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Written on 2009-01-12 at 16:56

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Love this twist
in the last one very clever :)

The bunny is my fave :)

~L.~

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Anne Westlund
Really wonderful Haikus. You have a good eye!

Anne
2009-01-13



I love them all and the last one the best. You capture early morning and nature at it's purest so well. Multiple haiku are a favorite genre of I! Smiling at you, Tai

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I have never seen so many Haikus on one page, I like the idea of Haiku suite. This was like a parade to me of different short verses.
I do love Haikus even though I have only written a few myself.
Thanks for posting as I enjoyed reading it.
2009-01-12