Shape poem, just for fun!

The Anglers Angle

the worms
i have my line
found a nice spot
all for myself sublime
i baited all my hooks
and waited a while
watched the birds
it made me smile
to sit in peace
wait for my
feast to
sea the food
and in ---- turn be
ours ---- too!

Poetry by Purple Phoenix
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Written on 2009-01-27 at 13:58

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Cool shape-poem. I've never seen one in the shape of a fish--very original. It's delightful.

Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
"to sea the food" nice one sis. And I see you got the shape happening. So cool... so cool.