I am not quite this cynical in real life.


Consider This

There used to be something so---I don't know---
infinite, perhaps,

about waking up to a
glittering, silent "good morning"

to soft white frosting on every treebranch

but nowadays it only means
that school will be delayed two hours
and I can get more sleep

which makes me wonder...
How ethical is this business
of locking up young people for six hours a day
five days a week
with few or no outlets for their blossoming creativity,
interests, sexuality, ideas

with few real choices
and rigidly enforced direction

clashing and crashing together...
Can we really condemn the violence
that sometimes breaks out in such crowded halls,
when really we have brought it all upon ourselves?

How could we adapt this system to make it more---
I don't know---
humane?

The next time you look into the eyes
of a sullen-faced teenager,
instead of judging her sour expression,
consider why she might appear so...exanimate.

Pity her, even, if you dare to,
because chances are she goes through as much pain,
stress, pressure, heartbreak

as you do, perhaps more---
and with far less sympathy and understanding from the world.

Don't judge her if on days
when you're overjoyed with nature's beauty,

she's merely thankful for a few hours' rest.




Words by Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
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Written on 2009-02-05 at 05:36

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Kaede
I have considered this
and found it to be absolutely true in regard to myself
which makes me quite sad
but I like this poem a lot
2009-02-05


TubaGiant
I really like the ideas in this poem
It's

Intense in many ways, and
Not too cynical actually.
This
Reflects much how
I feel about the
Gruelling
Uninteresting tasks of the day and how
I do often feel about
Not going to school...
Great... a few more hours o' shut-eye

Me Gusta Mucho
2009-02-05