Oddness and mournful disfunctionality.


Come close, go away (triolet challenge)

Come here---no, stop---now go away
don't touch me, please---no, please come back
---come near and I will make you pay!
Come here...no, stop. Now go away.
(These are the things I've felt today;
I fear my train has jumped its track...)
Come close. No, stop...now go away---
don't touch me, please...no...please come back...




Poetry by Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
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Written on 2009-02-09 at 23:50

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Ahh the way the mind and heart works inside our heads! Brilliant. Be sure, you will get what you need, despite yourself.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-09-04


Kaede
this reminds me a bit of 'Gently' in content
well composed and easy to relate to
2009-02-10


TubaGiant
Creative and
Original in your ideas.
Myself included, all
People feel this
Emotional turmoil that
Leaves us
Longing yet
In the same time
Not wanting....
GREAT PIECE
2009-02-10