Made some changes to it..


Before the time was right..


Why live life from dream to dream
never having anything concrete
Don't turn your head
All I wanted was for you to be mine

I showed you my heart
ripped it out while it was still beating
I could see, in the corner of my eye
See you run away

So here I go burning bridges

Did I play my hand too soon?



Words by Natalie
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Written on 2006-01-30 at 08:22

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Inked.
I love the subtle connection between burning bridges [the card game bridge as well?] and "playing your hand."

It works really well together. Good job.
2006-02-01


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
conjured so many thoughts with so few words. Really very good!

A heart worth giving will feel the pain but it it is compelled to chase its dreams.

Keep chasing.
2006-02-01


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
now you did not if you love someone tell them every day and someday someone will tellyou they love you to a nice poem for the guy best of luck Michael A Meddings
2006-01-30