My second attempt. This one with the 3-3-2 form.


God's Sigh Trois-par-Huit Challenge

Rain taps tunes
Of Aprils, Mays and Junes
And all the fresh offerings of Spring

Thunder clouds clapping, keep time for the dancing drops
Lightening bolts streak bright across the fretting tree tops
A concert performed to perfection

Written and produced by
God's sigh




Poetry by Phyllis J. Rhodes
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Written on 2009-03-25 at 01:17

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melanie sue
beautifully expressed! this is one poem i am glad i didn't miss, for it truly is a pleasure reading this....so much so, it is going in my bookmarks! this is wonderful!
2009-03-25